D’Verse Poets Pub – Quadrille #50 – murmur
De has us murmuring to ourselves at the Pub today
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Heart Condition
An affliction of the heart
Not a-pitter or a-patter
No whooshing, beating,
Thrumming sound
Something softer
Smoother
Steady
A whisper
That continues
Through the day
And through the night
A comforting small murmur
Of your voice repeating
“I love you”
rhymeswithbug 
Love this whispered murmur, Candy.
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yes, yes yes! 🙂
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Oh, yes….
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I have this heart condition
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Great surprise ending. What a wonderful heart murmur to have, someone’s love in your heart.
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That’s great… the soft hum of love,
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I love the shape of your Quadrille, Candy, like a cardiogram, the sound effects of the heart and the final lines are so gentle and heartfelt (pardon the pun)!.
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Thanks, Kim. I didn’t start out to create a shape – but you know, once we start writing, we’re not in complete control of the outcome. 😉
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Yes yes yes!!💖💖
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Thanks a bunch ❤️
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Wonderful poem! I love the murmuring heart saying I love you. When it stops, we’re gone!!
dwight
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Thanks from the bottom of my murmuring heart 😉
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How nice!!
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Murmurs are comforting when they are about love.
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Love the sounds! And I too was struck by the shape – there’s an invisible heart outline between softer and murmur
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Thanks! I didn’t even notice the heart shape until you pointed it out!
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It reads as warm as a heartbeat. Love all the sounds.
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Thanks!
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Beautifully written, my favorite position laying my head on her breast to hear that beat of love.
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Ahhh, sweet.
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Very timely!!!
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kaykuala
A comforting small murmur
Of your voice repeating
“I love you”
The lovely little voice will insist in making its presence felt! Very true, Candy!
Hank
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