d’Verse Poets Pub -MTB–The Minute Poem
Frank has us trying out a minute poem and it’s going to take much longer than a minute to accomplish this challenge.
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TROUBLES
I was having trouble sleeping
Moon came peeping
Caught me crying
Left me sighing
I was having trouble waking
Sun came shaking
On my shoulder
Left me bolder
I was having trouble seeing
Love was fleeing
You came giving
Life worth living
What a delightful minute poem. Meets the criteria in such a pleasant way!
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Very nice minute poem with the Moon, Sun and this special other person coming to help.
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So delightful, Candy. I like the sequencing from sleeping, waking to seeing. It built intensity. Happy ending.
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Loved this so much – put a spontaneous smile on my face.
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😊 thanks
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