d’Verse Poetics: Water, Water Everywhere
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Skipping Pebble
If I could be a pebble
I would skip myself across a
glassy lake – creating ripples
that grow larger, spread
farther until
they wash my love onto
the shore of your heart
Skipping Pebble
Such a lovely thought. Thank you for joining in!
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How sweet – love that ending line.
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Such a sweet and tender thought.
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I love your metaphor of being a pebble that transforms the water into a message of love.
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This was cool Candy, and well conceived, I like it!
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Thanks!
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I like the thought of the pebble wanting to wash love onto the shore.
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Your play with cause and effect are wonderful here. Charming image.
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Reverse personification works well~
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Loved those last two lines.
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I will skip pebbles tomorrow and it will be in a new magical realm, thanks to your lovely words.
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