d’Verse Poets – MTB – Repetition
Jilly has us repeating ourselves over at the Pub
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There was a heart
With a closed door
That I had never seen before
There was a sign
Upon that door
That I had never seen before
There was a word
The word adore
That I had never seen before
There was a lock
Upon the door
That I had never seen before
There was a key
To reach the core
That I had never seen before
There was a way –
True love secure
That I had never seen before
To just adore
That was the key
That I had never seen before
Now with that key
An open door
That I had never seen before
rhymeswithbug 
Both the repetition and the rhyme draw you into the heart and soul of this wonderful poem! So glad you shared it 🙂
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Very nice…love the ‘key to the door you have never seen before.
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Your words brings out the mystery of love with a beautiful rhyming flow.
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Love the repetition love poem Candy. To see with new eyes and adore may the secrets to true love.
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such a delight, the words heart and door kept me connected to wanting to know more, your poem is so absolutely wonderful to read out loud, i felt i was singing it at one point
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Thanks so much!
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Nice repeating line leading to a resolution.
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I can feel you walking in… almost like Alice in Wonderland I think.
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