d’Verse Poets Pub – MTB: To turn again, about turn again.
https://dversepoets.com/2021/06/03/mtb-to-turn-again-about-turn-again/
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Beggars Without Bowls
I offer seeds and nuts to the beggars
and they come, big and small, begging,
without bowls, for alms, for scraps that beg
not to be wasted. And I, like those beggars,
hope for a quick reward, a glimpse, for begging
them with seeds and nuts to appear – those feathered beggars
scavenging for leftovers beneath the feeder, beggars
without bowls in bird-like disguise
I love your metaphor! Beggars without bowls indeed! I have a couple of big fat gray ones with long bushy tail! They are definitely beggars without bowls!
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We get those bushy tailed beggars too.
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:>)
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Love this!
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Oh this is a unique image, deeply profound. These lines felt like a truth-punch:
I, like those beggars,
hope for a quick reward
Don’t we all?
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We surely do!
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loved reading this! the twist on the repeats are really good and especially that end line
“beggars
without bowls in bird-like disguise”
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Thanks!
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I really love this. Wonderful metaphor. The variations on beggars is so effective.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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I really like this too. I like the slow reveal that your beggars without bowls are birds. 🙂
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Thank you
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Love those beggers too💜
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Thanks
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💜💜
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My cat is also a beggar without a bowl, and begging sometimes turns into full-blown harassment! Nice write 🙂
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Oh, those cats!
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Incredibly creative how you used beg and iterations of the word throughout your well penned poem!
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Thank you!
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Candace,
Beautifully done and enchanting for this bird lover to read!
Pax,
Dora
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Thank you, from one bird liver to another
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I love… it, and now when they don’t need to beg as summer is here I love to hear them singing.
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Except at 3AM
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