d’Verse Poets Pub -Jazz poetry with Amaya
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All Jazzed Up
this poem is all jazzed up
hair slicked back
one cool cat, man
a take the (A) train
smoke-gets-in-your
eyes torch song
kinda poem
the heart of this poem
is laying down
a hope-you-dig-me
crazy beat
noodling a jive tune
to tell you –
before you split –
you send me
rhymeswithbug 
Love a poem with such slick movements…
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Oh the different ways to express love. I could hear the fingersnaps in this one. I liked,
“smoke-gets-in-your
eyes torch song
kinda poem”.
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I can hear that jive tune and love this part:
smoke-gets-in-your
eyes torch song
kinda poem
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I like the part expressing the heart of this poem.
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I loved this! Very cool.
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A sweet groovin’ croon to the best of the Jazz greats!
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