defend
your heart my
mother always said
but
this is not a fight
this is true love
and I surrender
~~
Badriomaku – Hungarian form
2-3-5-1-5-4-5
I recently was introduced to this form on Graeme Sandford’s blog
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Poetic Asides April PAD Day 11 – defensive
rhymeswithbug 
Very nice 🙂
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That’s so very sweet ~ a man would do a lot for a girl like that.
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Swooning over this comment.
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This is an out-of-the-park home run. Glad I wrote before reading this, as if I hadn’t already written, I wouldn’t have tried. Excellent, and feel good about yourself – you wrote the truth.
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thanks, you are too kind
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I know, right?!
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Lovely execution of the form 😀
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Thanks😊
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Brief and yet so direct. Cool form.
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Thanks 😊
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YES!
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agreed!
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Feels like a fight sometimes 🙂
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Not a fight… That’s is not bad if surrender’s no defeat.
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Damn, I love this. LOVE THIS. Do you hear me?!
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Thanks!
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so few words here — and a truism well stated. Unconditional love. 🙂
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It’s so fun to find new forms–thank you.
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It’s fun to share them too
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Defending your heart keeps you from finding love. Love requires vulnerability Thanks, that’s a good description
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thank you
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True love isn’t always true to both people, I found that out the hard way. Giving yourself like that has its dangers.
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Nice form. Wonderfully wise poem. Surrendering to true love…oh yes!
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Thanks 🙂
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