your heart my
mother always said
this is not a fight
this is true love
and I surrender

Badriomaku – Hungarian form
I recently was introduced to this form on Graeme Sandford’s blog

Poetic Asides April PAD Day 11 – defensive

24 thoughts on “Defenseless

  1. This is an out-of-the-park home run. Glad I wrote before reading this, as if I hadn’t already written, I wouldn’t have tried. Excellent, and feel good about yourself – you wrote the truth.


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