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With Closed Eyes

she always closed her eyes
when wishing on a star
she could not bear the scar
if there were only lies

some planet in disguise
bold, shameless avatar
she always closed her eyes
when wishing on a star

she did not realize
the moon strummed a guitar
hummed love songs from afar
with tender moonbeam sighs –
she always closed her eyes

—-

Today at d’VerseΒ Poets Pub, Gayle from BodhiroseΒ has challenged us to write a Rondel
Meeting the Bar; the Rondel

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I am a reader, a writer, and a snapper of photos

39 thoughts on “With Closed Eyes

  1. It looks & feels near perfect to form; lovely, sweet & romantic. to is wistful as well, touching on our need to make sense out of life & the cosmos.

    Like

  2. Avatars of human
    that story comes
    true.. when flesh
    becomes word
    and word
    becomes
    other we
    real are
    no longer
    jUSt no
    longer REAL..
    sTiLL here wITH
    no beating
    flesh to
    connect
    to sKin of otHeRs..
    the reward of living
    forever can be never
    living
    at
    ALL..
    immortality
    lives online
    dies
    off..:)

    Like

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