somewhere around the bend
is where our tomorrow lies
bend my mind around your
lies until it comes unwound
your smile will bind the pieces
unwound the clock of today
pieces fall in pools of time
today lags far behind
time on the path to somewhere
—–
the OctPoWri Mo challenge today is to write a loop poem where the last word in the first line is the first in the third a the last of the second is the first of rhe fourth and so on.
I certainly found it to be challenging – at least I gave it a shot.

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This is so good!
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thanks!
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Nice job! Lovely poem!
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thanks so much!
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Interesting challenge…and you did it well IMO 🙂
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thank you kindly!
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well done.
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thank you so much!
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I really like this.
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many thanks
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