
i dreamed i floated down a stream
left time behind to wait for me
and while i slept my friend, alone
stood patiently to light my way
back from the darkness of midnight
the slivered moon hung silently
afraid to shine and break the spell
i left all that i knew to fate
until the tide of dawn returned
me safely to my vacant bed
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This was very well woven.
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thanks 😊
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Absolutely.
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I enjoyed the night flight – always good to return to back to your bed though after a good journey…
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thanks ☺️
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Your opening couplet hooked me.
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so glad you liked it
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We need that moon to follow us and guide us back refreshed… Wonderful
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Thanks so much ☺️
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What a well-behaved moon! Delightful.
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Thank you and thanks for dropping in 😌
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Seems like a very pleasant journey
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One will always want a good dream to linger on and to perhaps have repeats the following nights. Wonderful write Candy!
Hank
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Thanks so much!
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Nice imagery. You took me there. 🙂
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Thanks a bunch!
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Oh, so lovely! I especially love: “i left all that i knew to fate” . . . sometimes, I think, this is the secret to our dreams
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Thanks!
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Lovely simplicity…
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thanks
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