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Meeting the Bar – Form: Tanka
two ruby red lips
parted in a flirty smile
tease the tired farmer
shapely form comes after dark
courtesan of midnight dreams
A Tanka
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At d’Verse Poets
Meeting the Bar – Form: Tanka
two ruby red lips
parted in a flirty smile
tease the tired farmer
shapely form comes after dark
courtesan of midnight dreams
What a sensual treat! I like the light tone of this very much.
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I agree, this is so well done! ❤️
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Kudos. Nicely done.
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I love the ending: courtesan of midnight dreams-
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I had to smile at the 3rd line, teasing that tired farmer
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“courtesan of midnight dreams” – love that line.
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thanks!
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Oh something tells me that tired farmer was up for the task. Enjoyed this very much.
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Oh, I love this tale of sensuous seduction…and that last line!
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Bless his wonderful dreams…
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courtesan, a well placed word. It somehow makes the poem.
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thanks!
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Sensual indeed!
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the farmer adds such a startling note to the courtesan of the night – sensationally sensual
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Farmer’s Love
Feels
no
bound
of FloWer..:)
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👍
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:)..:)
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There’s a whole story here in 5 short lines. Great stuff.
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Thanks 🙂
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