the word rolls
effortlessly from
my tongue –
lacuna
it has a romantic
sound
the sound of
a cello playing
a silky feeling
like soft melon
in my mouth
luscious and exotic
hiding the true meaning
the empty place beside
me – the gap in my world
where I am stranded
since you are gone
~
it’s the Flash 55 PLUS! challenge in theGraden
55 words – the plus is using the word lacuna
Oh, I love this. Lacuna does sound romantic. Well it does until you feel that emptiness within.
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This is brilliant!
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thanks much !
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Bloody marvellous poem based on a fabulous word. I too love the sound of Lacuna, but I also know the meaning, add the two and create poignant.
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thanks so much π
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A new word for me – thanks.
Often I have been told I have lacuna between my ears π
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hee, hee
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Humor is a good thing to have π
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Luv the surprise punch in your ending. Well wrought
Much love…
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Thanks π
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