Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge 1
” old pond”
~
old pond
frog jumps in
sound of water
© Basho
~
lily pads tremble
as ripples pass by
—–
old pond
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Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge 1
” old pond”
~
old pond
frog jumps in
sound of water
© Basho
~
lily pads tremble
as ripples pass by
—–
rhymeswithbug 
Trembles and ripples: great movement in your lines, Candy!
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thanks!
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I see what you mean:) Great minds think alike:)
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The light ripples can be felt in the heart.
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good one!
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A nice “undou” (movement) completion of this Tan Renga Candy.
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