old pond

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge 1
” old pond”

old pond
frog jumps in
sound of water
© Basho

lily pads tremble
as ripples pass by

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kim881 says:

May 1, 2016 at 3:18 pm

Trembles and ripples: great movement in your lines, Candy!

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1. Candy says:
  
  May 2, 2016 at 7:57 pm
  
  thanks!
  
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jazzytower says:

May 1, 2016 at 5:33 pm

I see what you mean:) Great minds think alike:)

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Kalpana solsi says:

May 2, 2016 at 1:23 am

The light ripples can be felt in the heart.

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Bastet says:

May 2, 2016 at 3:18 am

good one!

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Chèvrefeuille says:

May 4, 2016 at 8:29 pm

A nice “undou” (movement) completion of this Tan Renga Candy.

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