I love the illusion of you
that lingers on your
favorite chair and in
the rumpled sheets
I love the scent of you
that hangs in the air
after you pass by
I love the sound of you
that echoes through
these empty rooms
when you are gone
I love the feel of you
at the end of a day
when there is just us
Mmm. Sexy, yummy, warm.
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This is such a romantic piece 😀
Beautifully penned.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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thanks very much!
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I love the sensory details but its the ending that gets me 🙂
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Me too
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The sense of smell, the wanting and the last lines.. Very loving,
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This poem is well titled – so good to enumerate the ways someone might stimulate all one’s senses.
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I love the scope of this poem. Well done, Candy!
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thanks, Walt
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The emptiness is there in every line and the longing – this could be a love song to anyone – an empty nest perhaps.
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Well… you got the sensory stuff down pat 🙂
Very nice.
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I love the sound of you
that echoes through
these empty rooms
when you are gone
A loved one may be gone temporarily but their presence lingers on. The bond is already set where the feelings are strong. Nicely Candy!
Hank
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thank you, Hank
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This is the type of love poem I appreciate so much–gentle, not effusive. Perfect.
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thank you – I’m not a gushy person
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This is sensuous – such tender longing within. Love it, Candy!
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Thanks, Hannah
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Aw.. so sweet
when the
Lover
iS
HomE..:)
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for sure 🙂
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🙂
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