vast spent stars of darkest ink
I think
are hiding in the deep of night
they might
have given up their glow
just flow
above us here below
keeping wishes we have made
upon them till they’d fade
I think they might just flow
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De is tending bar at the pub and has challenged us to try our hand at an Ovillejo
Check it out at d’Verse Poets
rhymeswithbug 
How gorgeous, Candy. A shining example, indeed. 🙂
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thanks so much De!
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“keeping wishes we have made
upon them till they’d fade”…. Oh, what a lovely thought. Great job with the form.
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thank you kindly
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I love the thought here… somehow there has to be all the wasted stars somewhere.
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thanks! there is something mysterious about the night sky that inspires
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And flow they do, just as do your words! I enjoyed this.
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thanks much Mary!
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Your poem shines with the light of stars at night 🙂
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thanks!
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Your poem sure flows!!
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why thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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I think they just might flow, if they only take a cue from this perfectly executed Ovillejo. Very nice. Peace, Linda
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thanks so much Linda!
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I love those inky stars and what a great job you did with this challenging form.
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thank you much!
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Lovely at the thought of the stars keeping our wishes ~ Nice work on the work Candy ~
Thanks for joining us ~
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thanks for your kind words 🙂
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That flows well, the star heard you😃
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thanks!
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I love the image of spent stars as black as ink that hold onto our wishes.
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thanks Bryan!
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A lovely and tight little bundle of poetry, I think!
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🙂 thanks!
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beautiful thought…
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thank you
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Little do ‘they’ remember
or feel the fuller UniVerse
inside.. binoculars.. telescopes
that aid the eye so far.. but never
seeing
stars
of us..
so briGht
and liGht
just waiting
to come out
and play and
shine so BriLLiAnT..
hUman imagiNaTion
Moving.. ConnecTinG..
Creating.. Free aGain..:)
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wonderful! thanks for your words…
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And as always.. Thanks for your poetry friend.. As to me.. Free words from heArt are always gems to be cherished..:)
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