alone beneath the moon’s glow
stars like dust motes in the sky
the only sounds, cricket’s chirp,
croak of frogs so deep, so low
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Paloma introduced a form called The Twenty-Eight at B&Ps Shadorma & Beyond
Four lines of seven syllables each with lines one and four rhyming created by J Lapis
http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com
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Adore the croaking frogs.
“kaeru” meaning “frog” is not written the same way as “kaeru” meaning “return home”.
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thanks for your comment
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Such a beautiful reverie. Loved this. Happy Thanksgiving.
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Thank you! Hope your Thanksgiving is special.
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Loved you contribution … dreamlike and enchanting. Thanks for linking up Candy.
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thank you kindly
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welcome
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