I planted a red rose
Rose with a prickly thorn
Thorn that drew your blood
Blood that reaped your scorn
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At B&P Shadorms & Beyond we’re challenged to write a Loop Poem
Garden Loop
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A place for poems and pics
I planted a red rose
Rose with a prickly thorn
Thorn that drew your blood
Blood that reaped your scorn
—–
At B&P Shadorms & Beyond we’re challenged to write a Loop Poem
rhymeswithbug 
There is a famous song by Schubert called Heidenroslein which is the subject of your poem. Good use of the form.
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thank you!
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