our walk is like a symphony
passing through the movements
with our steps keeping time
allegro propels us out the door –
finding our rhythm we glide in the
sway of the scherzo up hill and down
until we turn for home, slowing,
largo, until we reach the final note
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written for Real Toads – Play it Again, Toads prompt
A Word with Laurie – Allegro, Eight lines, One Minute!
( I confess, it took me longer than a minute – blush)
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lovely movements in the lines….
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Thank you so much
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There is more than a moment capture in slowing from allegro to large.
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So true. Thanks for your comment!
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Oh, this is so good!
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many thanks!
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Love this so much
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thanks bunches!
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I really like the way you included words related to music in your description.
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thanks!
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Yes, the energy that begins a walk with the dog is very much “allegro” and it really does slow down as you described. Lovely – it put a smile on my face.
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Thanks! Glad I made you smile 😊
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Love this gorgeous captured moment.
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Thanks!
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This is well worth every minute it took. I love the pairing of walking the dog with the musical discriptors.
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Thanks much!
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A symphony of a stroll…love it!
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Thanks!
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As a musician, I love the inclusion of additional musical terminology … very nice.
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Thanks 🎶
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Were our poems suppose to take a minute to write? Haha! A very musical dog walk!
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Ha indeed 😉 . Thanks
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I love the idea of a walk like a symphony!
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