Tanaga

Plump gray clouds cover the sky

They bump, jostle, gently sigh

then carelessly overflow

with no care for those below

Published by Candace

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DELL CLOVER says:

June 21, 2015 at 5:26 am

This is marvelous!!! You’ve encouraged me to have a try at it.

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1. Candy says:
  
  June 21, 2015 at 9:15 pm
  
  Thanks! Go for it!
  
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C.C. says:

June 21, 2015 at 10:36 pm

Great perspective….and written so well…love the jaunty feel to this 🙂

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1. Candy says:
  
  June 21, 2015 at 11:03 pm
  
  why, thank you!
  
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Jen says:

June 22, 2015 at 11:57 pm

Very playful! And it works so well with the Tanaga form. Great work!

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1. Candy says:
  
  June 23, 2015 at 9:33 am
  
  Why, thank you!
  
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Bastet says:

June 28, 2015 at 9:38 am

Nice … liked the lightness of this verse … beautiful write!

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1. Candy says:
  
  June 28, 2015 at 9:35 pm
  
  You are so kind!
  
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  1. Bastet says:
    
    June 29, 2015 at 4:00 am
    
    🙂
    
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