Mama said shock me
rock me
knock my socks off
thrill me -chill me
use skill
instill me
with wonder
or thunder
pull me asunder
scatter my heart
flatter my soul
it doesn’t matter
unlock the chatter
spill out the worst
shock me
speak of demons
leave me weak
with fear or cheer
deep in the night
delight takes flight
replaced with dread
the dead arise
it’s only lies
you realize when
light arrives
just
shock me
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Over at Toads Mama Zen wants to be shocked in 77words
I’ll also be posting at d’Vers Poets for OLN
rhymeswithbug 
Fun play with Mama Zen’s prompt and so glad you joined it to dVerse.
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it was a fun one to write – well, you know how it goes – it wrote itself
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I feel like I should sing and dance to thins. Fun! 😀
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oh, wouldn’t that be fun!!
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Such a wonderful rhythmic chant and flow 🙂
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thanks – it was fun to write
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Ha, if Mama says, then one better listen! This poem had a rhythm which made it really fun to read.
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always listen to Mama 🙂
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This spills like a song, Candy. Love it.
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thanks, De
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This rocks!
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thanks for this prompt! at first I thought I’d have to pass on it and then……. well. you know how it goes. some pieces write themselves
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I like. 🙂 Especially the opening.
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thanks! 🙂
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I can hear this as a poetry slam….a feisty little piece it is! 🙂
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it was a fun one to write!
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It truly rocks.. I wonder if the morning light that shock the most or the darkness of night.
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thanks Bjorn! I think I’m more shocked by morning – not a morning person here.
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A thrill-spill cascade of words 🙂
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😉 thanks!
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Great rhythm!
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thanks!!
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WOW! I love this spill of words!
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thanks bunches, Sherry!
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This was so much fun to read! Love the rhyming timing and jive talking!
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excellent!!
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Love the bounce of this!
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thanks!!
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My pleasure!
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Well said!
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Fun tale, and I love the rhythm and rhyme.
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thanks, Bryan
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LifE
compLetes
wITh LiFe..:)
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For sure!
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SMiLes..yes!..:)
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…seems like a dare.
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😉
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