there was a girl
who dreamed about
a bright yellow sun
a golden construction
paper circle in the
clear blue sky
a warm and friendly sun
whose rays reached out
to touch the cotton ball
clouds as they passed by
there was a girl who pressed
her nose against the rain
streaked glass and dreamed
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I love this.
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Thanks so much!
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I like the image you end on – of that little girl looking out into the rain and dreaming.
I think storms slow us down so that we can do more of that.
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Thanks! You’re right about storms slowing us down.
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I love the girl pressed against the window. There is something magical and captivating about a heavy rain. It most certainly draws us to the window to watch and ponder. lovely write
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Thanks so much!
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I like the dreaming of the bright yellow sun ~ This is a good contrast to the girl who pressed her nose against the rain ~
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Thanks!
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a bright yellow sun
a golden construction
paper circle in the
clear blue sky
These are such beautiful lines! The images in this entire poem.. are so dreamy.. so full of euphoria 😀
Beautifully executed 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thank you so much!
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I like the image of a golden moon cut out of construction paper..and dreaming of the sun always brings a sense of warmth.
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Thanks!
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dreaming…isn’t that the most beautiful thing to do on rainy days… i like the cut out sun image and almost felt the feel of the cool window on the girls face…
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Thanks!
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Imagination.. Dream of creativity coming in paper dolls of Sun and Rain.. Rain.. Dreams of
Sun.. Stars.. Galaxies.. Super Novas.. and so much more.. for Rain seeding Life to Organic
SoUls.. in flight of heArt in Emotional and Sensory SpiRit.. bringing
feeling finAlly to whole Imaginative Creative View
of Dreams finAlly
aLive
as Life..:)
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Thanks for another great response!
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Oh I love how rain and the slowing down intensifies the dreaming… Wonderful
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Thanks so much! We’ve had a rainy summer so far here.
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This is superb, in the vein of ”petit prince”
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Thank you very much!
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Yes, I love it too.
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Thanks!
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In Philippines, we only have two seasons. The first half of the year belongs to Summer while the rest will be the Rainy season. The rainy season has officially started in here & mind me, it’s going to be quite a long wait for summer again. Your poem reflects the same longing & excitement that i feel today for the sun. Thanks for the poem!
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Glad you liked it!
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I’ve been this little girl. So lovely.
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Thank you!
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Very beautiful images – I adore this. Thank you for participating my prompt.
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Thank you so much!
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