White apple blossom prophets
Foretell of sweetness
Tiny swelling at the base
A promise to the gnarled
Old tree, a sign of its
Usefulness, its reason
For existing
And in old age a
Child becomes our prophet
(written for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads)
I really love how you weaved a truth through the promise of Apple-blossom.. Maybe we need to let it age to understand the wisdom in youth.
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Thanks so much!
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This is absolutely lovely.. 😀 Wishing you a very happy mother’s day 😀
Lots of love
xoxo
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Thanks a bunch!
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Sharp truth in the ending lines:
And in old age a
Child becomes our prophet
Thanks for participating with Real Toads and wishing you happy weekend ~
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Thanks. Happy weekend to you also.
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Wonderful, Candy. That last line is strong.
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Thank you 🙂
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Flowering apple trees are a favorite thing of mine. When linking to a challenge at Toads, please link to the specific poem, not just to your main page as a whole. People shouldn’t have to scroll down to find the right poem. I fixed this one for you.
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Thanks. I’m still trying to figure out some of these techy things.
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This is wonderfully written….love the old tree and the child prophet.
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I like this very much.
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A very sweet write.
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For me, the opening with the blossom as the prophet is astounding and I love that you close similarly creating a tight cyclical piece. Excellent work, Candy!
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Thanks so much!
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We go from beautiful blooming to gnarled limbs…So much wisdom in this piece.
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