There was a great challenge over at Pheonix Rising yesterday. Take one your your poems and replace words in it with synonyms (or antonyms)
Here is my attempt-
music filters through
my days in the reveille
of the waking sun
soft wind humming in my ear
the moon’s peaceful call of taps
—————-
notes rain down on
me daily through the
trumpet call of morning
gentle susurration of a breeze
a moonbeams gentle lullaby
These both work so well.
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Thanks 🙂
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