Sun shines soft upon the land
trees and rocks and rivers
Shines for every woman, man
shines for every creature
We should turn our faces up
fill our hearts with solace
Reach out and extend a hand
allay another’s sorrow
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Bastet has prompted us to write a hymn. She gave us the example of Good King Wenceslaus.
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Really nice rhythm and rhyme.
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thanks!
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A fitting hymn/anthem to spring and rebirth. Well done.
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thank you
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I could almost hear it in song! 🙂
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I was humming Good King Wenceslas while I wrote it 😄🎶
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It helps establish rhythm, huh?
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Fits well with the carol. Enjoyed !
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I like the flow of your hymn the rhyme is great and the sentiments you express are just what we need! A great job Candy and what a splendid photo! Happy New Year! Bastet
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Thank you!
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