d’Verse Poets Pub -MTB: endings / beginnings
Only a Dream
She dreamed of leading a big marching band,
With a shiny baton twirling in her small hands
She didn’t want drums or a horn she could toot,
instead she asked Santa for majorette boots
The white leather ones with bright tassels of red.
They’re the pair she envisioned at night, in her bed.
So she went to bed early, this good little girl,
Pulled her blanket way up so it covered her curls.
She kept her eyes closed when wind started to blow,
the rooftops and bushes soon were covered with snow.
The best winter night for dear Santa to bring
the boots that she wanted more than anything
But her letter to Santa must have lacked clear instruction.
The boots under the tree were a felt reproduction.
Poor little girl… maybe there will be some nice boots later.
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Admittedly, I laughed at the ending. Goes to show that what we ask for may not be what we would have anticipated. This is a great ending, and perhaps a lesson for the child to be more specific or even grateful for what she was able to get as a present.
Beautifully written!
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Great write. Santa did seem to get bad information sometimes, didn’t he?! lol
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Life often isn’t kind, especially to children. I like what she was dreaming for. The red tassles reminded me of the sugarplums in “The Night Before Christmas.”
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Oh! Santa !
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Perhaps this disappointment drove her to become a better, more determined majorette; equally though, she may have just become sullen and decided that she didn’t trust that Santa guy with her heart’s fondest dreams. Laughing gently here.
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This is a cute story and I smiled at the ending. Next time, Santa, smiles.
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*LAUGHING*
So cute!
-David
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This is a fantastic poem! I love it!
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Thank you 😊
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Oh, how fun and joyful!! I love the cadence and needed this morning smile with my coffee.
Good one!
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I love this!!! A big broad smile crossed my face as I read the last line …. (must share in 1955 I was a majorette wearing white knee high boots.) LOL
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Excellent response to Peter’s wonderful prompt. Hope you have a great holiday season, and look forward to reading more of your work in 2021.
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Thanks, Rob. Best wishes to you, also!
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Awww, cute story. Maybe next year…
Wishing you a joyous holiday season.
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oooh! I felt this one! 😉 Merry Christmas! 🙂
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