d’Verse Poets Pub – Poetics: Make some room
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The Old Cat
The old cat has no room he calls his own,
he claims a spot til it’s no longer new.
He wanders round this space seeking a throne,
a sunny nook to warm his weary bones –
a padded window seat will surely do
The old cat has no room he calls his own.
Somedays a mournful yeowl he does intone,
when favorite blankets have been left askew.
He wanders round this space seeking a throne,
preferring quietness, to be alone
to ponder catching flies and mice and shrews.
The old cat has no room he calls his own –
he owns it all, each board and stepping stone.
His humble servants also know it’s true.
He wanders round this space seeking a throne,
a cardboard box that he can get into
and fall asleep, curled up and unbeknown.
The old cat has no room he calls his own,
he wanders round the space seeking a throne.
They do make whatever space they choose their own, don’t they?
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That’s for sure
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Ha! The fifth stanza says it all, (Oops, gotta go, my cat wants this spot)
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This is a nice villanelle, and it’s fun that you wrote it from a cat’s point of view.
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So true. The cat rules!
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We’ve been catless for years, and yet we don’t have the energy to bring home another one.
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he claims a spot til it’s no longer new.
I like your take on the prompt!
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Nice villanelle. I especially liked the line about the cat having no room of his own.
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I love cats old and young and I love this poem, Candy! You’ve captured the essence of a cat, the way ‘he claims a spot til it’s no longer new’ and ‘a sunny nook to warm his weary bones’. I especially enjoyed the repetition of ‘The old cat has no room he calls his own’. Your poem reminded me of T.S. Eliot’s Old Possum’s Book of Practical Cats.
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Bravo! the Villanelle works well with its repetitions of the old cat making his way through the rooms
“he owns it all, each board and stepping stone” – a brilliant line!!
thank you for joining in with the prompt
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I loved how repeated the two last lines throughout the poem! And I really enjoyed this!
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A cat that would make any cat proud!
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Obviously written by someone who knows cats well.💜
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He has no room but his own kingdom.
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We are merely his servants. (K)
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I love everything about this poem. Really felt it, great post! ❤
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Auch a wonderful poem and so true. Thanks for sharing it.
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