Poetic Asides – Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 430
Write an Annoyance poem
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All Hail the Queen
It annoys me –
Just a little –
That my gripes are
Never as gripey as yours
My woes, not as
Woeful
My worries can’t compare
My annoyances not
Annoying enough
You win
You are the queen of whining
You get to wear the crown
Which you, no doubt,
Will complain about
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Also posted at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads – Tuesday Platform
I’m making this poem work really hard and posting on d’Verse OLN too. Poor little poem.
rhymeswithbug 
Push her in a puddle 🤣
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Ha! 👍
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🤣🤣🤣🤣💜
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Enjoyed this! (The link did not go through properly – I had to click on your header and then I saw it.
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Thanks. I went back and posted a corrected link. I will never learn to proofread 🙃
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Hey Candy, the link you have up on the Toads isn’t working. I came here ’round the back way. Can you try linking it up again? This is a very amusing piece. We all know people like this.
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Thanks. I just reposted
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I would think you’d get the crown for whiniest gripe!
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Ha ha! (I am not clever enough to find “the back way” so I am glad you reposted.)
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Clever stuff Candy – willow dot’s comment also made me smile tonight…
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Hard working poem indeed ~ Love it a lot, not complaining 🙂
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I have know people like this! Nothing ever right… always complaining!
Dwight
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On how this brought up bad memories of a co-worker who always had to have the whinyest whine…I say…push her off a bridge!! Clever poem.
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Nice ending complaining about the crown as well.
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Ha… there should always be a good reason to complain
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This made me giggle. Long live the Queen.
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