Poetic Asides – Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 424
Write a ‘sick’ poem
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Remember Me
I get a funny feeling deep
In my tummy – or is it
My heart – not quite sick
More forlorn, whenever I
Click the box ‘remember me’
On an online form
It’s kind of like the feeling I
Get whenever I think about
Fun we had and how we laughed
Until tears ran down
Our cheeks – then someone
Snorted and we laughed
Even harder and how
I wish there had been a box
For me to check
On your heart that said
‘remember me’
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Thanks! 🙂
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Good poetry gives me goosebumps…and this one sure did.
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Thanks, Tim.
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That last line says it all!💞 Beautifully written 🙂
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Thanks, Sanaa
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There is nothing more important for a human being than to be remembered.
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I think it is what we all deeply long for.
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