This week in the Garden, Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk has asked us to condense a poem by Pablo Neruda by at least half, using our own voice. I chose to really condense the poem Sweetness, always, into a Shadorma.
Weekend Mini Challenge: Condense a Poem
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Write poems
Filled only with words
From your soul
Simple words
Words that sing and soar before
Landing in my heart
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That’s it. Just like that. No need for grand words, or little words. Just words that are true for one heart and ready to become part of another. I love that.
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Thanks so much!
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Yes, words that speak without frills. Love this!
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Thanks so much!
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simple words are often the best
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