Victoria has us repeating ourselves over at d’Verse Poets Pub
I’ll Say It Again (and Again and Again)
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The Stars and Me
I thought I saw the stars wink at me
As if they knew my secret
I thought I heard the stars whisper
As if they might be gossiping
I thought I felt the stars hopping
As if they could share my joy
I thought I whiffed the scent of stardust
As if the stars were blooming
And so I turned my face up
To the sky and blew the stars
A kiss
Blew the stars a kiss, is so beautiful, just like flowers
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Such a good personification of the stars…I love their winking and whispering. Great poem.
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thanks much
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That is such a lovely poem, Candy, especially the winking stars and the kiss blown to them.
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Soo beautifully romantic this one! ❤️Blowing a kiss to the stars 😀
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A beautiful poem Candy and I love you blowing a kiss to the stars xxx
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A fitting end to a lovely poem.
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I always love the company of stars…
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this brought a twinkle in my eye
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I love any poem about stars but this was just amazing. How often have I blown kisses to the stars…
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Wow! If you wish on a star, you should blow a kiss. Lovely.
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Reblogged this on Old Guy Walking and commented:
I love this poem! Would you mind if I reposted it at my site?
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Thank you
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I really really like this poem! I have reposted it at my site, if you don’t mind!
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Hmm. Well I don’t object (hey if you like it and it’s your post then it’s your space), but I don’t like it. I have a strong dislike for all anthroporphism. The whole idea of the stars having some consciousness seems ridiculous to me. I want to shout “forget the stars, talk to the person in fri to come you”
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Hmmm ….. I appreciate you thoughts. Try this one
I turned my face toward the sky
and gazed, enthralled, at the
luminous spheres of plasma
so far away, they seem to twinkle
I turn to you, so close to me
hold your hand
kiss your cheek
and sigh
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