At B&Ps Shadorma and Beyond, Bastet shared the background of the Shadorma poetry form and challenged us to write our own using some of the ‘rules’ of classic haiku.
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Moon Lit
Hunter’s moon
lights the barren field
where we met
last summer
rabbits scurry off to hide
are you hiding too
Like the use of the Hunter’s Moon as narrative. Great shadorma.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks so much!
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Ah … a bit of melancholy makes for a lovely shadorma … splendid. @)—>— .
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