Tuesday Poetics at d’Verse Poets – the sound of love
Well Aged Love
creaking bones
and after dinner burps
soft snuffling beside
me in bed
and even some
midnight flatulence
moans and groans
when getting up
in the morning
whistling (off key)
in the shower
grunting anytime
bending is required
sounds of well
aged love
YES. Love this subtle love song, Candy!
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Ah.. yes it’s not always those songs of youth… and I do love it.
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awww. the sounds of enduring, lifetime love. great! ❤
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Ah, even on off key tune sounds a beautiful melody. ❤
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I’m glad I am not deaf….or blind…either would be an incredible adjustment or challenge…even the negative sounds and sights 😉
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Those long familiar sounds – wonderful as the new moans of young passion. I like this poem very much.
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Oh I love this.. such a profound write ❤
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sMiLes.. yeah..
56 can kinda be
hard on a love of
dance2.. as the only
sound i make when i get
back from doing this noW iN
mY.. 123rd week in a dance
hAll of folks around 35 years
my junior.. is the Sound of Sanford
and Son as Red Fox stumbles in with
wife saying only if ‘they’ could ‘hear’ how
epic
you
are not now..
sMILes.. Aging
gracefully
as what
does
the
Fox
say..
sinGs Free
and Old wiTh gRAce..
with not a sound my FriEnd..
quiet can be the Loudest
Love oF aLL..
in non-
verbal
Langauge noW
as A Dance feat goeS oN..
funny how some folks cannot
understand that not all SonGs of Love make Sound..
or even facial expressions for that matter my FriEnd..
as Dance
can be
the loudest
Love oF aLL
totAlly Quiet and iSREAL..
anyway thanks for yoUr inspiRinG Words..
as a Dance Tree and LAmp oF liGht moveS oN..:)
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thanks – keep dancing!
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Yes..:)
SMiLes..:)!
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Oh I had some warm chuckles at this, sounds just like my grandparents who have passed on, but always loved us and each other very well. Thanks for the reminder! 🙂
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Very nice.
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A love well seasoned IS a noisy thing, isn’t it? Great imagery here, Candy!
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‘Well aged love’ – I love it! Like well aged wine, perhaps (if noisier).
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he,he
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