d’Verse Poets Quadrille 10 – breeze
it was a breeze that brought the scent
of summer roses to my room
I closed my eyes and thought of you
and nights we spent along the stream
I felt your kisses on my lips and heard you
whisper words of promised love
rhymeswithbug 
Oh I do love the thought of a scented breeze like that….wonderful
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thanks …
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I can feel that breeze, smell that scent… so delicate.
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Thanks!
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And I wonder if the promise ended more quickly than the scent on the breeze. I hope not. Lovely poem.
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Thank you 😊
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I love that scent… There is a sense of longing and bit of romantic nostalgia in your words ~
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‘Along the stream’ – an unexpected line and that is what makes this poem so perfect in the reading!
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Thank you!
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Delicious. Scent is one of my strongest memory triggers.
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Thanks De
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Mine, too. Scented memories are powerful.
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Perfumed memories!!!
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Oh Lord.. it’s been
oh God.. but this
reminds me..
yes.. 37 years
ago.. and i can
still remember the
smell and name of
that first perfume
of my first Love..
the name was BABE..
and oh my wife is so
much more Lovely and
still looks as young almost
as that 16 year old girl at 46..
seriously.. it’s true.. i’ve photos that
prove that.. hehe.. noW on my blog but
yes.. anyway.. it’s kinda sad as honestly i
cannot remember any of the smells
of my wife’s perfume or names.. but
oh! i kNow.. i FeeL.. i would NoW
if she ever leaves..
or faLLs aWay breeze..
perhaps.. i’ll now go grab
a bottle.. spray it all.. over
mE now.. and bask noW iN
thE nAMe and SmeLL Now
oF LovE TrUe..
oh! thanks so much
Candy.. this inspireS
me.. so noW.. mY friEnd..:)
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Thank you so much!
I love the thought of basking in the smell of true love.
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And thanks
Again!
To you..:)
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It was a breeze that brought the scent, was it the breeze that took the promise away? Beautiful poem. 🙂
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thanks!
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So romantic! Ah the breeze can waft a scent right into our memories 🙂
Wonderful take on the prompt.
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thanks!
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Kept promises are never forgotten. They become memories! Well done, Candy!
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thanks Walt!
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I love your romantic quadrille
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thanks!
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Love is in the air….bringing back sweet memories. How beautiful. 🙂
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thanks Mish!
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I think smell is the sense most evocative of memories!
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So true
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