we spread a blanket
on the ground
lay down to feel
the world go round
to watch the showy
stars of night
go dancing by-
squeal with delight
to toast celestial
bodies glow
with bread and cheese
and fine pinot
the clouds were heavy
in the sky
they cloaked the stars
from human eye
but we saw stars
in spite of this
we found them in
a moonless kiss
——
rhymeswithbug 
What a happy, romantic poem this is – a moonless kiss! I just love that image. The rhyme and rhythm of this was so very enjoyable. Thank you.
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thanks so much!
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A mischievous jauntiness to this – perfect for young love. Reminds me of that famous line from ‘Now, Voyager’ – Don’t lets ask for the moon, we have the stars.’
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Ah.. the fireworks of falling in love… the last stanza really moves the stars to a symbolic level.
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thanks 😊
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a beautiful discovery of love…
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Ah! The love, the mischief, the romance 🙂 A moonless kiss sounds delightful and so does that pinot! Wonderful
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Just lovely. One can see those stars so clearly when one is with the one loved….sharing wine and bread and cheese….and kisses! You have set an atmospheric scene here!
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thanks, Mary!
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Absolutely gorgeous write 🙂
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thanks so much!
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Sounds delightful!
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Gorgeous. I love “moonless kiss,” especially.
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thanks De!
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Really sweet, I like that “moonless kiss” too. We can make our own starlight can’t we?
Gayle ~
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thanks!
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Really enjoyed your romantic poem – it lifted my spirits.
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thanks!
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nice bit of romance…creating your own stars through a loving kiss 🙂
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thanks!
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Very cute and romantic. I love your rhyming choices, too. Peace, Linda
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thanks!
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ah young love…..they make their own fireworks….their own stars. Especially in a moonless kiss!
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big smile!
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Ooh love this! Those two are going to have a wonderful night, no matter the weather. 😉
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thanks!
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Lovely, loving poem. Although here, no blanket on the ground please–18 degrees F this morning. :0)
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thanks! brrr…….. it’s unseasonably warm here but not quite warm enough for a blanket on the ground
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Very romantic scene…no need for the moon and we can just imagine the stars 🙂
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thanks Grace!
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Brief yet says so much…..
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thanks!
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very sweet and the rhyme fit it perfectly. loved the closing
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thanks!
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Starry-eyed romance…..so nice!
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thanks!
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Romance, rhyme, rhythm: bliss.
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thanks so much!
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STar.. liGht oF eNergy..
humAn EmoTioN FoRce
BRings EneRgy.. BriNgs LoVe
BrinGs
StaR
WoRks
iN hUman
eYes..:)
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yes, we can find love in the eyes. thanks for this!
Merry Christmas
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Merry Christmas.. To you with best new wishes.. Candy.. Too..:)
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