autumn winds blow
bare tree branches tremble
winter birds remain
autumn winds blow
brown leaves scatter across grass
swirling away
bare tree branches tremble
flock of doves gather
at sunset
winter birds remain
searching for leftover seeds
among spent flowers
This really flows nicely!
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thanks much!
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Oh Candy, what a beautiful troiku … you’ve painted a wonderful image of autumn in it’s last days and your concluding haiku really moved me very much. As Carol said, it flows beautifully e .. like a river. 🙂 Bastet
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Thank you so much. I was inspired by your beautiful example.
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A lovely compliment … thank you!
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powerful.
😉
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thanks very much 🙂
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Very accomplished handling of the form. Well done you.
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thanks so much!
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This reads like a short story …. well done.
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thank you so much!
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My pleasure
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