Deep in the Night

~ Candace

Sometimes when I’m all alone
When light has surrendered
Darkness blurs the lines
Then fantasy rules the night

When light has surrendered
I quickly take to my bed
Pull the covers over my head

Darkness blurs the lines
Right and wrong are blended
Into imaginary possibilities

Then fantasy rules the night
I peek from my hiding place
Watching as dreams perform

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Published by Candace

I am a reader, a writer, and a snapper of photos

15 thoughts on “Deep in the Night”

  5. Darkness blurs the lines
    Right and wrong are blended

    Sometimes it becomes impossible to distinguish between right from wrong.. as there is a thin line between these two.
    One can only hope to follow the light which radiates from their instincts and thus avoid being plunged into darkness.

    Beautifully penned.
    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  6. Culture erasing imagination creativity..
    Humans losing humanity slowly..
    torturing death in life from birth..
    rising alive.. dreams fruition..

    Humans losing humanity slowly..
    drifting away.. childhood suffocates..
    Childhood sLows.. adults die as life..

    torturing death in life from birth..
    Spoon feeding culture
    large plate from birth..

    rising alive.. dreams fruition..
    spark inside.. coming now..
    imagination’s creativity.. Phoenix SpRinGs..:)

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  8. You have captured that in-between time, betwixt consciousness & REM, when the dervishes from our day swirl into & are swallowed up by the night; several pieces done about night out here on the trail

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