I took what she had to give –
this old mother covered with a
worn black shawl
The hand that held the
bottle was gnarled
like an ancient tree branch
– a simple potion of bark and ashes
She promised that one sip would
cause love to flow – passion to
burn like fire
I did not sip
I’ll leave future
to fate
a promised potion or leave to fate… That will always be an interesting question.
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I love the way you open this.
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Thanks so much!
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I lik this and the conclusion,Candy
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Thanks so much!
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Hmm, interesting!
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Oh, this is wonderful! I love the atmosphere you conjure up, and the story you tell.
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Thank you so very much!
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oh to have that choice. such a beautiful story, here. lovely poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Yes fate is probably preferable.. I think the best in such a potion is the one that doesn’t kill you.
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